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- Mythology Creative Writing: Thoes who angered the gods -
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So far my least favorite project. I had a hard time with this one...I'm so unpleased.
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Once there was a young man who found himself in a very bad situation, that wasn’t exactly his fault. He lived in a small village named Fanelia that was settled in between the Great River and The Red Mountains. The Fanelians were very devout to the gods and they made sure to pay their dues to their protectors and creators.
Settled within the icy depths of the Great River lived the water demon Kadaj, who disliked the gods very much. He himself thought he should rule the seas and rivers, and was bitter that the gods didn’t grant his wish. He wanted the Fanelians to pray to him. Finally he became so angry at their non cooperation that he decided to teach them a lesson.
He rose out from the glass like water and headed to Fanelia. With one great roar, and a swish of his demon wings the village soon began to crumble. Scared, the villagers decided to elect a person to try and protect them. They choose a man named Soran; young, athletic and not very religious at all. Soran didn’t know what to make of this choice made by the villagers, especially because he didn’t worship much at all, but when he tried to argue, the villagers ran.
And so the battle began. Poor Soran, a mortal who had to fight for a cause he didn’t believe in, versus and angry and vengeful water demon. But, somehow Soran prevailed, and when he made the final thrust into Kadaj killing him, a bright light glowed throughout the room and a voice flowed through his ears.
“Soran,” the voice said, “I am Lebit, leader of the gods and creator of all humans. Thank you for your bravery. You have saved your people, and the village you live in. As thanks for your gratitude, the gods have a gift.”
The bright light flashed and then set on a small bundle on the floor.
“Meet your daughter Soran. Her named is Beltane. She will grown into a beautiful woman, her appearance matching those of the goddess of love Cythe herself. She will marry rich, and in the end take care of you. But, you MUST NOT force her to marry! When the time is right it will happen. Great fortune awaits you. But be warned, patients is a virtue.”
And with that the bright light vanished, and Soran was left alone with his new daughter.
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Years have passed and Beltane is now of age 18, and has still not married causing Soran to become impatient, wanting his gold and riches. He hears word of a prince that is passing through Fanelia, and rather than sending Beltane herself to meet him, goes himself. He meets the prince and promises him that if the prince marries his daughter he will gain riches beyond his belief. Intrigued the prince agrees but promises Soran that if he is lying he will pay dearly. They head to Soran’s house.
“Beltane come and meet your husband.” Soran yelled arrogance present in his voice.
Beltane appeared and the Prince bowed and kissed her. At that moment the light flashed again, but it was much different this time. Now, Beltane and the Prince were not moving…time was being stopped.
“Soran,” a voice spoke and he realized it was Lebit and he was very angry, “You disobey me. Now, you will be punished.”
Suddenly Soran was sucked into a hole, and transported to a room filled with gold. He tried to reach out and touch the gold, but was stopped by something. He looked down and saw two snakes constricting his feet to the ground. Suddenly the snakes repeatedly began to bite him, their icy venom sending fiery and icy pain throughout him. “What is going on here!?” Soran bellowed.
“Your punishment.” Lebit spoke, with a slightly amused sound in his voice. “You will stay here for eternity, right next to the gold you pined for, but be forever killed and eaten by the snakes. Feel what so close, yet so far away is like. Perhaps now you will learn patience.”
And so it was. Soran still remains in that hellish room-screaming with agony because he cannot reach his precious fortune, rather than with the agony of being eaten alive. Greed does funny things to people. Perhaps now, you will be more careful, else you may end up like Soran.
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When writing this I originally wanted Soran to fall in love with Beltane and anger the gods that way, but I couldn’t do the whole incest thing. I defiantly wanted to portray a feeling of sadness towards the ‘hero’ in the beginning, that switched to “geeze that guy was an idiot” at the end. I hope my whole idea got through. I made it so that Soran’s greed and lack of patience was his fault.
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